Eternal Punishment

This is a submission for Kevinโ€™s No Theme Thursday.

Image by Kevin from The Beginning at Last

It was a myth they said

Tale as old as time

A king who shouldโ€™ve been dead

With trickery he cheated death twice

Until one day

Zeus made him pay the ultimate price

Chained in Tartarus – a punishment, an obstruction

The moral is

No one can forsake their comeuppance

Rolling the heaviest boulder uphill

Damnation eternal

Hardship that will test your will

Power hungry

A cycle that never stops

Just when you think youโ€™re through

Repeating like a broken clock

Accept what the fates have in store

Sometimes itโ€™s better

To live your mortal life and not seek more

Changing your path when you must

For good intentions

Hoping never to end up like Sisyphus

ยฉ๏ธ Laura Bennett


A shorter one, as Iโ€™m still not quite back in the swing of writing yet, also probably not my best work. Canโ€™t resist my Greek stories and lessons, however.

Thanks for reading.

49 comments

  1. Excellent writing and excellent lesson, Laura. Thank you for posting this even though I know you’re still not feeling all that great. Most deeply appreciated. ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

    Get well soon. ๐Ÿ™

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  2. I love the Sisyphus story. I bookended a whole novel around that oneโ€”itโ€™s very suited to how us writers thinkโ€”every day, back at it, trying again to make something out of nothing, never getting the load off, art as burden, etc.

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    • So much agreed! Always continuing upwards only to have it all fall back down on you over and over again!! And then getting back up for more punishment! Lol ๐Ÿ˜†
      Thank you ๐Ÿ™
      Did you ever get to go out on the lake?

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